thank you for taking the time to watch & give feedback to my latest short-film. means a ton to me.
i'm mainly looking for general feedback - but even more importantly - what is *not* entertaining? what parts did you get bored / want to grab you phone? did you, as the viewer, gain appreciation for dave smith at the end of this run?
my own notes:
- would love to shorten the pre-game speech at 6:34. I'm trying to figure out what is the most interesting section of it.
- the scene at 3:28 is intentional - but I'm scared that the point of using that mixed with the scene after will make sense / viewers will catch on to "the point" of both of those side-by-side/together.
- would love to shorten the pre-game speech at 6:34. I'm trying to figure out what is the most interesting section of it.
- the scene at 3:28 is intentional - but I'm scared that the point of using that mixed with the scene after will make sense / viewers will catch on to "the point" of both of those side-by-side/together.
what's not finished:
- color grade
- sound mixing
- sound design
- color grade
- sound mixing
- sound design
if you could use the message/form below for feedback, it'd be greatly appreciated so I can keep everything organized. feel free to reference specific time code in the film.
thank you <3
p.s. - below, for my hockey friends, mic'd up video of everything that not only didn't make the cut, but can't make the cut (DO NOT SHARE)
Thank you!